deserted eyes at night

forget most lamps

synthesizing light
using inner sight

innate to man

deserted eyes at night
know twilight

as Nature can

synthesizing light
in dichotomous rite

divergent from plants

deserted eyes at night
face flux with might

deride it with cant

deserted eyes at night

synthesizing light.
Karen Robiscoe dba CHARRONs CHATTER

Β©Karen Robiscoe

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I bring to you an arrow, whole, Use it, or break it, But if you choose to take it --Know-- With it also, I will go. Β© Karen Robiscoe @1992

13 Responses to “Growth”

  1. The real night light

  2. Great piece of poetry and the graphic
    reminds me of a scene in Re-Animator πŸ™‚

    Have a wicked evening Charron πŸ˜‰

    Andro xxxx

  3. Bravo!

    The creatures of twilight have come to capture our imagination and dreams.
    I like this poem of yours…awesome! rhymes and visuals. πŸ™‚

    • thank U, Charlie! I was thinking about the villanelle form as a whole, today, and I think better forward flow is achieved with compound sentences…else a little stilted. (I was flummoxed by this poem since I liked and really thought about the beautimous words, and progression, too, but those bastids still wore stilts…;)

      I really enjoy “tackling” this form.

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