I’se write good prose
> heaven knows <
I’se punctuate
somethin’ great…
My brand o’ wise
—sorta flows
like Bordeaux—
fortified
So relate
intoxicates.
I squeeze my eyes
> into rows <
I’se rhymes in time
just innate…
my flights inside fanciful
—bold & bright
like my sleight—
shaded words
just a’waiting
on dictate.
I fluff my sees
> into sow <
I’se writes my wrongs
into gates…
I’ve been through it
—dont’cha know
gonna show—
what I learned
then in turn
prate will actuate my fate.
©Karen Robiscoe

September 22, 2013 





Ek Ong Kar Sat Nam Siri Wha Guru = 8 or ∞ if you will.
infinitely partial.
what?
Most excellent Karen
super fun…I bumped into an unexpected rhyme schematic…
those are the best.
It strikes me as the type that speeds up as you get nearer to the end. I loved the way it read
Well, you know…this was a full “read out loud” as i created poem—my general way of achieving proper meter (flow in the case of fiction)
It reads fun out loud! Like a jingle…an advert-ee/vert slogan…:)
hope your Sunday is/was and has been most eggs-cellent. I’ll pop over in a bit! (so clean up! 😉
Hehe Just tidying a few bits up now
It is a mantra of eight.
Lovely rhymes my dear Karen. And I did read this one out loud! ♥
Thank U, Brit! The whole thing just led me through itself, lol..:)
(always read your stuff to yourself…you hear things the eye skips…;) )
Wow, how wickedly exciting, or is that
excitingly wicked? 🙂 Either way I like it 😉
Andro xxxx
a tittle and tottle of both, Andro hunny. Thank you for your wonderful remarks. You always write something on pointe!
May I say how wonderful it was to se you in
your video my sweet friend, I like that one a lot 🙂
Have a very exciting evening and new week 🙂
Andro xxxx
I love your wordplay. In my Limerick category I have one called Grammar. You might like it. 😉
oooOOOoooo…(ooo!) I am ver’ intrigued…and I love your great taste, hehe…:)