Aloha Means Good-bye

April 6, 2014 by Charron's Chatter 6 Comments

Hula honey

on a stage

swivel as I pass

∇

shake that butt

and coconut

when I hit the gas

∇

spin a hoop

around your waste

until I hit the brakes

∇

ditch the ring

and try to cling

to dashboard while you shake.

Ο

©Karen Robiscoe

poetry, sadness, stunned, verse

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I bring to you an arrow, whole, Use it, or break it, But if you choose to take it --Know-- With it also, I will go. © Karen Robiscoe @1992

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6 Responses to “Aloha Means Good-bye”

lytw8t April 6, 2014 at 3:42 pm

shake that butt

and coconut

when I hit the gas… im thinking alot of things.
its lovely poem quiet catchy
- Charron's Chatter April 6, 2014 at 3:56 pm
  
  hehe. Yes, there are some double-entendres, there! Maybe triples…:) Thank you for stopping in, hunny–hope your Sunday is peaceful.
Tina J.S April 6, 2014 at 3:56 pm

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! Great as always 😉
- Charron's Chatter April 6, 2014 at 4:03 pm
  
  thanks, TJ! u r a rock star!! (soon to be…:)
John April 7, 2014 at 11:57 am

‘waist’? Quite clever on every level.
- Charron's Chatter April 7, 2014 at 1:52 pm
  
  thanks, John–it was fun to “spin” this little ditty. 🙂