the River Clicks

June 20, 2014 by Charron's Chatter 6 Comments

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Maybe we are in hell already.

Think about it.

Surrounded by a river

of lifeless faces

all screaming for attention

…

Impossible to talk to the boss–

Maybe the only people

going to heaven

are off grid

…

or, you know…

on My Space.

©Karen Robiscoe

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6 Responses to “the River Clicks”

J.D. Gallagher June 20, 2014 at 2:34 pm

I love this one. Excellent opening line. Right from the start it has you wondering and wandering the different scenarios and pieces of evidence to back up the suggestion. Nice one.
- Charron's Chatter June 20, 2014 at 3:09 pm
  
  Thanks, JDG! 🙂
Marissa Bergen June 20, 2014 at 3:20 pm

Nah, no ones on My Space!
- Charron's Chatter June 20, 2014 at 3:52 pm
  
  exactly.
Chess June 20, 2014 at 4:03 pm

Lol, so funny because it could be absolutely true!
- Charron's Chatter June 20, 2014 at 4:08 pm
  
  I know it! I got a creepy ass weird feeling when I thunk it last night…
  
  Thanks, mate!