An Uncrowded Island

A bummer

my summer’s

stuck on an island

once boat that I boarded

struck submerged piling

and leaving marina

it sank within minutes

the ship and its crew

and ‘near everything in it

excepting of course

Five things in a tin—

that worked as a floater

and bobbed to an inlet

most likely because

of rubber within it

—treading the trainers

I favored for running

as well as containers

with cream for the sun

since PABA’s important

but not number one

like papers & pencils

that’s also among

the pot that I cook with

’cause cooking is fun.

Karen Robiscoe dba CHARRONs CHATTER

I bring to you an arrow, whole, Use it, or break it, But if you choose to take it --Know-- With it also, I will go. © Karen Robiscoe @1992

Al December 5, 2013 at 10:49 pm

Fantastic. I love the way you did that 🙂
- Charron's Chatter December 6, 2013 at 2:37 am
Gray Dawster December 6, 2013 at 9:08 am

Love it Charron 😉 🙂

Andro xxxx
- Charron's Chatter December 6, 2013 at 2:16 pm
  
  thanks, Andro. 🙂
I HAVE A VOICE December 6, 2013 at 11:38 pm

you certainly cook delicate dishes! With a pencil for your own recipes~ 🙂 SS
- Charron's Chatter December 6, 2013 at 11:54 pm
  
  These things are prolly not hugely practical in the long run–except for the pot–I could purify water in it…but i was thinking more along the lines of a 3 hour tour (a three hour tour)…:)
  
  I swear, I think it is my QWERTY that randomly “un” capitalizes the “I” pronoun–that, or I am spastically bad at hitting that key..hehe…