shooting starthe place before creation

is a world of its own

impalpable foundation

not made of flesh or bone

its imprecise location

a universal home

More of a vibration

in transcendental tone

a melodic adaptation

of aggregate that’s known

a trembling narration

that dictates mortal stone

an ending destination

for every living soul

so enjoy this short vacation

since all life is a loan.

ยฉKaren Robiscoe

daily prompt: space

About Charron's Chatter

I bring to you an arrow, whole, Use it, or break it, But if you choose to take it --Know-- With it also, I will go. ยฉ Karen Robiscoe @1992

20 Responses to “Before”

  1. It really is on loan to us, isn’t it…your reminder is wonderful..

  2. Merry Christmas to you and your family ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Dear Charron, I am happy to hide a small present for you under Christmas tree, please unwrap it:

  4. MisBehaved Woman December 23, 2013 at 7:04 pm

    So beautiful…this made my whole dreary morning just light up…thank you!

    • and the best part is–it’s true. String theory pretty much bears that out…;) *she says, grabbing a super-sized paintbrush * Thanks, Reb, I have to say, your posts shone light on my morning, too; I am even now watching a docu I found when searching for 99 isn’t 100 on our version of Netflix (installed as part of an independent broadcasting service: ROKU) called: Ethos, narrated by Woody Harrelson. << a favorite activist.

      I will rent that other, though. (PPV)

    • MisBehaved Woman December 23, 2013 at 8:51 pm

      Oops, I wasn’t clear – the documentary is Waste Land, the 99 is not a 100 quote was just my favorite part ๐Ÿ™‚

      Ethos is excellent and Woody…yes, yes! Highly underrated and still too well known for creepy acting roles to be taken as seriously as he should be. :-/

  5. This is so beautiful….so simple and elegantly written. Your place is wonderful Charron ! Would love to read more from you ๐Ÿ™‚ Best wishes…Happy Xmas โค

  6. There’s a rare depth in your soul… a brilliant star shines in your eyes as it does in this creation SS! BEAUTIFUL culmination !


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